Toast's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Crazy Tutorial]

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Those codes can be find everywhere!
I have a feeling you copy & pasted 'em.

[bmx]

Read the tips for submitting.

If you've read it,you would know that you should NEVER leave the author's comments empty. It makes many people vote 0.

"• DO NOT leave the comments blank. When I see 'Authors Comments: none', I'm already thinking: 'Well, if they can't be bothered writing something about their movie, it must be shit'."

It actually looks traced.It doesn't seem you put much effort into it..

no-fx responds:

ok

[Flight of the Spaceship]

Awsome!

That spaceship was awsome! Nice job on that,dan.

[Covetous Dragon]

It could be longer

I liked it,it wasn't bad at all.You seem to have a big talent for drawing.Your animation isn't great though,I'd call it "lazy animation".There was no real point in this movie,no end.What happened to the other dudes?Why did the dragon kill them,why did they go to kill him?Did someone give them money for trying to kill a dragon?...No plot...

lazy48th responds:

I originally planned to have more of a plot and actually show them fighting and get eaten. I spent more time drawing than actually using flash to animate it. I had only a few weeks experience with the flash program and didn't really know how to use the program well. I eventually ran out of time, and had to finish it with what I had to turn it in as my midterm.

[The Mask and the Monster]

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I didn't like it,my mom says not to approach or to talk to people who eat other people >:(

[look both ways]

Bad perspectives!

And one of them looked in a really uncomfortable position,practice your drawings a little bit more before submitting.

baskotoiea responds:

this is not my animation, i submitted it on behalf af a friend, but thnx ne way

[Turd of the week sailing.]

I voted 1

Not because you said it but because I think it worths it.
Good luck for the turd of the week :D

[Ragnarok: Excision]

Hint:

NEVER say it is your first flash,even if it is really your first.
It is maybe the first flash you submit on NG but not the first flash you have made!
I hesitated on flagging it,people kissing and some one dying(did she die?!)a creature burning people,I would say it is a ibt unsuitable,mild alult themes and mild violence.

AlienHeadX responds:

Well, Im sorry you feel that way. It is actually my first flash on NG. I did make two other flashes that I didn't submit to newgrounds. They were experimental. And yes she did die.

[Skate2 -BabyJackson-]

not too bad

but it is a shame you used stick figures.And the animation wasn't reallistic at all!

[Gun Gallery 1 (old)]

Good!

You seem to like guns very much!You also have a talent drawing them.Good work!
I voted 3