Toast's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Locked Up ep. 6]

LOL...

meh...pfft...fail

S13g responds:

Thanks Toast. Shit was getting lonely. :)

[Happy B-day Flash Lounge!]

lol

im flattered

TheCriminalDuder responds:

Toast! :D <3

[The advantages of AS.]

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1. I thought Inglor was supposed to submit it.

2. It wasn't good, the point in AS threads is to TEACH actionscript, not to give a code to be copy & pasted.

3. You didn't include all the tutorials.

4. Your AI thing didn't work.

5. It wasn't the original work of the writers.

6. You didn't credit all the authors.

7. It doesn't really teach anything.

8. FOSS: Main could have been done like that since it's just codes, no explanations nor comments.

gypsy-love responds:

Toast. Hello. What do you mean inglor was supposed to submit it? I wasn't trying to teach actionscript. I was showing the advantages of learning actionscript. FOSS: Main is dead.

[Who Gives A Sith]

Not bad!

Graphics: I wouldn't rate it if I could since darth vader, obiwan, and anakin were mine. The other graphics were pictures.

Style: 6. A bit original, it's surely your style ; ).

Sound: Unfortunatly,I don't have speakers : (.

Violence: 5,a bit violent.

Interactivity: 1 for the play button : P.

Humour: 7. Self explanatory.

Overall:
7.

Hey, that was quite funny, nice work!
I saw my name in the credits : D
Keep up the good work ;-)

PhroggStudios responds:

hehe thanks, aw man u need speakers!!! thats the best aprt abotu this movie, the song!

[bmx]

Read the tips for submitting.

If you've read it,you would know that you should NEVER leave the author's comments empty. It makes many people vote 0.

"• DO NOT leave the comments blank. When I see 'Authors Comments: none', I'm already thinking: 'Well, if they can't be bothered writing something about their movie, it must be shit'."

It actually looks traced.It doesn't seem you put much effort into it..

no-fx responds:

ok

[Covetous Dragon]

It could be longer

I liked it,it wasn't bad at all.You seem to have a big talent for drawing.Your animation isn't great though,I'd call it "lazy animation".There was no real point in this movie,no end.What happened to the other dudes?Why did the dragon kill them,why did they go to kill him?Did someone give them money for trying to kill a dragon?...No plot...

lazy48th responds:

I originally planned to have more of a plot and actually show them fighting and get eaten. I spent more time drawing than actually using flash to animate it. I had only a few weeks experience with the flash program and didn't really know how to use the program well. I eventually ran out of time, and had to finish it with what I had to turn it in as my midterm.

[look both ways]

Bad perspectives!

And one of them looked in a really uncomfortable position,practice your drawings a little bit more before submitting.

baskotoiea responds:

this is not my animation, i submitted it on behalf af a friend, but thnx ne way

[Provincial Practice]

not that good.

This movie has no point.Movies can survive if they have at least good animations and graphics even if they have no sense.Sorry,but your movie was craply animated with motion tweening,very badly drawn,and extremely boring!

23450 responds:

12 hours of animating time, i think i did pretty damn good.