Toast's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Peaceplane]

Not bad

I voted 5.Some people give 5 to all of your flashes,it was ok,not amazing.I can't believe it has 3.8 score,I guess you have lots of fans...I am sure that if monkokio had done that alone,people would vote 2!The screen is a bit too small.nice job.

DanPaladin responds:

wow, you disrespected both of us at the same time in different ways. thanks a lot.

[Easy Chess]

Awsome!

This game is absolutely awsome!I do you make their inteligence?!
I used to take chess lessons in school and I was very good at it but now I have almost forgot everything.it's not that easy,I had a draw.
Very nice actionscript,good graphics...Asome!

[Weird Bicycle Game 2]

Haha.

Awsome Flash.

Graphics:
the graphics were quite good,the background was well made.
Style:
Very good Style,very original
Sound:
I LOVED that music,lol.bicy bicy bicycle!la la la la la la la....
Violence:
I was afraid the animals would eat my brain!
Interactivity:
well,it's a game!

Very nice flash,awsome job!

RVWD responds:

hm.. detaiiled and clear review, thnx!
nice to hear you enjoyed it!

[Henry the Hamburger Game]

It could have better

I gave 0 graphics because the hamburger looked like a hot-dog :P
The hamburger movenent wasn't very good,it would be better if you had a full control of the hot-dog-hamburger.
You can maybe try this code for the movement

this.onEnterFrame = function() {
// Where hamburger is your movie clip that you want to ease
hamburger._x += (_root._xmouse - hamburger._x) * 0.03; // 0.1 is the easing value
hamburger._y += (_root._ymouse - hamburger._y) * 0.03; // You can try tweaking the easing value if you want
}

and make so that when the score is equal to 1000 for example,the number of Sienfelds inscrese(level2)by making a simple code
if (score==1000){...
It could have been better...

DAIRYDOG responds:

THANKS BUDDY BUT I ALREADY KNOW ACTIONSCRIPT I WROTE ALL THE CODE FOR THIS GAME MYSELF SO I KNOW HOW DO DO ALL THE FANCY PANCY X AXIS STUFF BUT I CHOSE TO KEEP IT ON THE Y AXIS AND USE THE MOUSE BECAUSE I'M SO HARDCORE BUT THANKS ANYWAYS CHUMP. OH AND ABOUT THE LEVELS AND STUFF NO I DON'T THINK SO THE ESCAPE FROM MCDONALDS IS A ONE LEVEL ETERNAL ESCAPE WHERE YOU MUST ALWAYS STAY ON YOUR TOES AND RUN OR ELSE THEY'LL CATCH YOU AND YOU BETTER NOT COME CRYING TO ME WHEN THAT HAPPENS BECAUSE YOU'RE SUCH A CHAMPASORUS-REX. HAVE A NICE DAY BYE.

[Jumping Circle]

Could have been much better

The graphics suck!We want effort,please.Ok,So you have copied a nice engine used hitTest and a bit random(I think)and you've made a nice game.make more levels.
Make that every time a platform goes down a counter is+1 and when it reaches a precise point(50?)The platforms become red for example and the width descreses(different level).What you have to do if youwant different levels is:
--make a dynamic textbox and call it counter(Var name not instance)
--make a line in the bottom of the screen(unvisible)and paste this code in it:
onClipEvent(enterFrame){if(this.hitTest(_root.platforms)){c
ounter+=1;}}
Don't forget to put this code on nothing(in the panel)
counter=0;
then paste this code:
if (counter==50){_root.platforms.play (2);}
//note:you can change 50 to 10,25...

put a stop(); on the first frame of the platform and on the second frame,put a stop too and make the platforms smaller other color...
That's all,I think.You've got the basics,though...

[Drawing Hands for Dummies]

nice tutorial

you know how to draw nice hands but I have a question:
Why do the first guy has only got 4 fingers?